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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. wpnY
The line chart displays the amounts of visitors visited a specific Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. Overall, it is clear from the graph that total number of visitors are increased over years, also visitors staying on cruise ships and visitors staying on island are increased in 2010 to 2017. In 2010, total 1 million of visitors went to the Caribbean island and every year this number was increased significantly and in 2017, it reached to 3. 5 million visitors in total. However, visitors staying on cruise ships was fluctuate from 2010 to 2013, when amount visitors staying on cruise ships were 0. 5 million. From 2013 to 2017, the amounts of visitors staying on cruise ships are increased gradually, which was from 0. 5 million to 2 million. In contrast, visitors staying on island was increased from 2010 to 2013, which was over 0. 5 million to 1. 5 million. From 2013 to 2017, visitors staying on island was remaining same which was around 1. 5 million, although in 2016, the number of visitors staying on island was went down to less than 1. 5 million.
The line chart displays the amounts of
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visitors
visited a specific Caribbean
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island
from 2010 to 2017.

Overall
, it is
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clear
from the graph that total number of
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visitors
are
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increased
over years,
also
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visitors
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staying
on
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cruise
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ships
and
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visitors
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staying
on
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island
are
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increased
in 2010 to 2017.

In 2010, total 1
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million
of
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visitors
went to the Caribbean
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island
and every year this number was
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increased
significantly
and in 2017, it reached to 3. 5
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million
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visitors
in total.
However
,
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visitors
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staying
on
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cruise
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ships
was
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fluctuate
from 2010 to 2013, when amount
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visitors
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staying
on
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cruise
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ships
were 0. 5
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million
. From 2013 to 2017, the amounts of
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visitors
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staying
on
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cruise
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ships
are
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increased
gradually
, which was from 0. 5
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million
to 2 million.

In contrast
,
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visitors
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staying
on
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island
was
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increased
from 2010 to 2013, which was over 0. 5
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million
to 1. 5
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million
. From 2013 to 2017,
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visitors
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staying
on
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island
was remaining same which was around 1. 5
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million
, although in 2016, the number of
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visitors
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staying
on
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island
was
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went
down to less than 1. 5
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million
.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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6.5
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