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The line graphs display carbon emission rate among four developed countries from 19967 to 2007.

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The line graphs display carbon emission rate among four developed countries from 19967 to 2007. United kingdom and Italy possesd highest emission rate, wheras Sweden and Portugral recorded the lowest amount of carbondioxide emission. United Kingdom was the maximum carbondioxide emission country, though the rate decreased gadually from 11 metric tonnes to 9 metric tonnes in amount for the 40 years of time. A dramatic uprising was observed from the recorded point in Swedeen and hitted the peak valued at above 10 metric tonnes of carbondi oxide emission. But the rate plummeted contineously and reached its lowest point at approximately more than 5 metric tones, the minimum point was observed here. For the first 10 years, Italy emitted around 2 metric tonnes of carbondioxide, was a rapid growth of rate and then it increased slightly till 1997. But the rate remained plateaued for rest of the years. Started from the lowest point among any other country recorded here, there was a gradual upword tendecy for Portugral in the rate of carbon emission from 1996 to 1977, rouse by around 4 metric tonnes, while it remained unchanged as the same rate of Swedeen, noted the lowest rate than UK and Itally.
The line graphs display carbon
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among four
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developed countries
from 19967 to 2007.

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,
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Sweden and
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Portugral
recorded the
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amount of
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carbondioxide
emission.

United Kingdom was the maximum
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carbondioxide
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emission
country, though the
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rate
decreased
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gadually
from 11 metric tonnes to 9 metric tonnes in amount for the 40 years of time. A dramatic uprising
was observed
from the recorded
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point
in
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Swedeen
and
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hitted
the peak valued at above 10 metric tonnes of
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carbondi
oxide
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emission
.
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But
the
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rate
plummeted
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contineously
and reached its
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lowest
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point
at approximately more than 5 metric tones, the minimum
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point
was observed
here.

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first
10 years, Italy emitted around 2 metric tonnes of
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carbondioxide
, was a rapid growth of
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and then it increased
slightly
till 1997.
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the
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remained plateaued for rest of the years.
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from the
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among any other country recorded here, there was a gradual
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upword
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tendecy
for
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Portugral
in the
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of carbon
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from 1996 to 1977, rouse by around 4 metric tonnes, while it remained unchanged as the same
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of
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Swedeen
, noted the
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than UK and
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Itally
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IELTS academic The line graphs display carbon emission rate among four developed countries from 19967 to 2007.

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