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The line graph shows TV news viewing figures over a one-year period.

The line graph shows TV news viewing figures over a one-year period. koX2

The line graph compares the number of people who watch the news in a year. This is measured in millions. Overall, it is clear that news at 11 pm start from the lowest, and hit the peak, but finish at the least again. While 1 pm is almost constant, 6 pm and 9: 30 pm decrease with some fluctuations. With regards to 11 pm, fewer people watch in May with just above 0 million. Then, it shows a rapid increase to 4 million in August, and maintain the highest position. Afterward, it suddenly falls to about 1 million at the end of the period. By contrast, 1 pm viewers roughly remain constant at more than 1 million. In terms of 6 pm, viewers are at the top position with just beneath 5 million. It decreases significantly to 4 million in march before it starts fluctuation till the end of the period, and it finishes at nearly 3 million and maintains its highest position. However, viewers of 9: 30 pm are at just above 3 million in January then it rises minimally to about 4 million in May. Afterward, it falls sharply, and dip at approximately 1 million in August. It climbs again and reaches at 3 million at the end, and maintain second-highest position.

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 the news in a year. This is measured
 in millions.

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some
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 of the period. By contrast, 1 pm viewers roughly remain constant at more than 1 million.

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. It decreases significantly
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 of the period, and it finishes at nearly
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. However
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just
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 in January then it rises minimally
 to about 4 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 in May. Afterward, it falls sharply
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million
 in August. It climbs again and reaches at 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
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, and maintain second-highest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withareapointspotseatenvironmentstand
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