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The given maps below show the changes that took place in New Zealand

The given maps below show the changes that took place in New Zealand b9LY

The given maps illustrate information about the many changes that took place in Newzealand between 1980 and 2005. Overall, it is noticeable that a lot of trees and houses have been removed to spare space for constructing new buildings and facilities. At a fleeting glance, it is immensely clear that in 1980, trees were everywhere in the town and the main type of building was house. Trees were located mainly alongside the River Alanah while houses were concentrated nearby the coast. There were only some basic facilities such as hospital, school, airport and railway station. Basically, the town was a pure residential area. In contrast, various kinds of construction have been developed over the 25- year period. Trees and small houses have been replaced by new stadium, factories, warehouse and skyscrapers. Some houses have been demolished for new railway. In addition, transportation has been more convenient due to the existence of extended railway and new marina.

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many
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changes
 that took place in Possible spelling mistake found.ZealandNederland
Newzealand
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, it is noticeable that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
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trees
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houses
 have been removed
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new
 buildings and facilities. At a fleeting glance, it is immensely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that in 1980, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsaplingshrubwoodforesttimberseedling
trees
 were everywhere in the town and the main type of building was You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsaplingshrubwoodforesttimberseedling
Trees
were located
mainly
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Alanah
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houses
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concentrated nearby
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only
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some
 basic facilities such as hospital, school, airport and railway station. Basically
, the town was a pure residential area. In contrast
, various kinds of construction have been developed
 over the 25- year period. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsaplingshrubwoodforesttimberseedling
Trees
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
houses
 have been replaced
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new
 stadium, factories, warehouse and skyscrapers. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
houses
 have been demolished
 for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 railway. In addition
, transportation has been more convenient due to the existence of extended railway and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 marina. 