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The chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education.

The chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education. LNYR
The bar graph illustrated that students take admissions in the various level of education at school Overall, it can be seen that highest percentage is tertiary education in developed country was crossed the target and primary, secondary education in developed contries almost remains same and the percenatge for developing countries in all the three education sectors varies slightly. The percentage of girls in the primary education in developing countries reached 83 per 100 boys in 1990 and 87 per 100 boys in 1998 it is below the target. Same sector in the same year increased slight around 8-10 percentage and remained below the target. In terms of secondary and tertiary education the developing countries enrolled percentage of girl students has been decreased in the year 1990 and 1998. The number of female students who are taken part in the secondary and tertiary education admissions were increased and passed over the target fixed at particular year.
The bar graph illustrated that students take admissions in the various level of
education
at school

Overall
, it can be
seen
that highest
percentage
is tertiary
education
in developed
country
was crossed
the
target
and primary, secondary
education
in developed
contries
almost remains same and the
percenatge
for developing
countries
in all the three
education
sectors varies
slightly
.

The
percentage
of girls in the primary
education
in developing
countries
reached 83 per 100 boys in 1990 and 87 per 100 boys in 1998 it is below the
target
. Same sector in the same year increased slight around 8-10
percentage
and remained below the
target
. In terms of secondary and tertiary
education
the developing
countries
enrolled
percentage
of girl students has
been decreased
in the year 1990 and 1998. The number of female students who
are taken
part in the secondary and tertiary
education
admissions
were increased
and passed over the
target
fixed
at particular year.
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