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The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four european countries between 1990 and 1999.

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four european countries between 1990 and 1999. lajJ
The line graph provides the information about the number of vehicles theft per thousand in France, Sweden, Great Britain and Canada between 1990and 1999 It is vivid that, the number of vehicles theft per thousand was increased in Great Britain with more than 15000 in 1990. It is further increased at the end of 1999 as compared to another country. That was also more than 15, 000vehicles. Apart from this, a nearly similar number of vehicles theft in Sweden and Canada with less than 10, 000 vehicles. Afterthat, the number of Sweden vehicle theft increased and reached less than 15, 000 vehicles. whereas, the number of Canadian vehicle theft decreased and similar to France at the end of 1999. The decreased number of France vehicle theft in 1990. It was increased in 1991 with 5. 5000 vehicles. Thereafter, in 1999, it was also decreased about more than 5000in France. Overall, it is clearly seen that, the increased number of theft in great Britain while, the deceased number of car theft occur in France in all years.
The line graph provides the information about the
number
of
vehicles
theft
per thousand in France, Sweden, Great Britain and Canada between 1990and 1999

It is vivid that, the
number
of
vehicles
theft
per thousand was
increased
in Great Britain with more than 15000 in 1990. It is
further
increased
at the
end
of 1999 as compared to another country. That was
also
more than 15,
000vehicles
. Apart from this, a
nearly
similar
number
of
vehicles
theft
in Sweden and Canada with less than 10, 000
vehicles
.
Afterthat
, the
number
of Sweden
vehicle
theft
increased
and reached less than 15, 000
vehicles
.
whereas
, the
number
of Canadian
vehicle
theft
decreased and similar to France at the
end
of 1999. The decreased
number
of France
vehicle
theft
in 1990. It was
increased
in 1991 with 5. 5000
vehicles
. Thereafter, in 1999, it was
also
decreased about more than 5000in France.

Overall
, it is
clearly
seen
that, the
increased
number
of
theft
in
great Britain
while, the deceased
number
of car
theft
occur in France in all years.
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IELTS academic The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four european countries between 1990 and 1999.

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