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Expenditures of Two Countries on Consumer Goods in 2010

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The chart illustrates the amount of money spent on five different types of consumer goods (cars, computers, books, perfume and cameras) in France and the UK in 2010. Units are measured in pounds sterling. Overall, the UK spent more money on consumer goods than France during the period given. Both the people in the UK and in France spent most of their money on cars whereas the least amount of money was spent of perfume in the UK compared to cameras in France. The biggest difference in expenditure between the two countries was on cameras. In terms of cars, the British spend about $450, 000 on it as opposed to the French at $400, 000. Similar to that, the spending on Books by the British was also higher at slightly above $400, 000 compared to the French who spent about $300, 000 on that type of consumer goods. In the UK, expenditure on cameras was just over $350, 000 which was more than twice the amount of money spent on the same goods by the French (which was only $150, 000). On the other hand, the spending on the remaining goods was higher in France. The French spent more than $350, 000 on computers whereas the British spent slightly lower than that (at $350, 000). While perfume tended to be the type of goods that both countries spent money on the least, the French paid out on that goods for $200, 000 in 2010, whereas the British only spent a little bit less than $150, 000.
The chart illustrates the amount of
money
spent
on five
different
types of consumer
goods
(cars, computers, books, perfume and cameras) in France and the UK in 2010. Units
are measured
in pounds sterling.

Overall
, the UK
spent
more
money
on consumer
goods
than France during the period
given
. Both the
people
in the UK and in France
spent
most of their
money
on cars whereas the least amount of
money
was
spent
of perfume in the UK compared to cameras in France. The biggest difference in expenditure between the two countries was on cameras.

In terms of cars, the British spend about $450, 000 on it as opposed to the French at $400, 000. Similar to that, the spending on Books by the British was
also
higher at
slightly
above $400, 000 compared to the French who
spent
about $300, 000 on that type of consumer
goods
. In the UK, expenditure on cameras was
just
over $350, 000 which was more than twice the amount of
money
spent
on the same
goods
by the French (which was
only
$150, 000).

On the other hand
, the spending on the remaining
goods
was higher in France. The French
spent
more than $350, 000 on computers whereas the British
spent
slightly
lower than that (at $350, 000). While perfume tended to be the type of
goods
that both countries
spent
money
on the least, the French paid out on that
goods
for $200, 000 in 2010, whereas the British
only
spent
a
little bit
less than $150, 000.
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