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The line graph shows the sales about children book , adults fiction and education books from 2002to 2006.

The line graph shows the sales about children book, adults fiction and education books from 2002to 2006. 9wG3r
The information about the details of adolescents books, young one fiction and education books from 2002 to 2006 is depicted by line graph. The data has been calibrated into million dollars. Overview, it can be seen that children books followed upward trend, whereas adult fictions were witnessed by downward trend. Moreover, education books fluctuated during the given period. At the very first glance, it is clear that retailing of adult fiction stood at nearly 46 million dollars in 2002 which was highest as compared to others. It went down gradually around 37 million dollars in 2003. Adult fiction sales fluctuated slightly about 40 million dollars between 2003 and 2005. In terms of children books were recorded around one third in initial year. After that, sales increased slightly approximately 42vmillion dollars. The figure showed a moderate growth between 2003 and 2005. There was a exponential rise in sales of children books till 2006 With the regard of educational books, the figure of sales were observed around quarter in 2002. Then it showed variations till 2006.
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of adolescents
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, young one
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fiction
and education
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books
from 2002 to 2006
is depicted
by line graph. The data has
been calibrated
into
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million
dollars.

Overview, it can be
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seen
that children
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books
followed upward trend, whereas adult
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fictions
were witnessed
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, education
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books
fluctuated during the
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that retailing of adult
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fiction
stood at
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46
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million
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dollars
in 2002 which was highest as compared to others. It went down
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around 37
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million
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in 2003. Adult
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fiction
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fluctuated
slightly
about 40
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million
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between 2003 and 2005.

In terms of children
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books
were recorded
around one third in initial year. After that,
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increased
slightly
approximately 42vmillion
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dollars
. The figure
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showed
a moderate growth between 2003 and 2005. There was
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a
exponential rise in
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sales
of children
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books
till 2006

With the regard of educational
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, the figure of
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were observed
around quarter in 2002. Then it
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showed
variations till 2006.
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