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talk about an event ( a concert , a party , a movie , a game ) you like

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every person is born with a birthday. Last year's birthday was the happiest birthday of my life. I think even if i experience many other birthday parties in the future, i won't forget that day. To prepare for the party, my mother and i went to the supermarket together and bought decorations and food. It took us a day to perpare. I invite a lot of friends. My classmate, friend near my house, and loved ones. That day, i made a buffet. Plates of fresh and decilious fruit and snacks are beautifully laid out. I recived a lot of gift and birthday greetings. At 11 pm, everyone started to leave. After the party was over I cleaned up with my mother and I still couldn't help smiling. This is the first time i feel the joy of my birthday. I want to thank mom for helping me have a great day

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