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The bar graph depicts the expenditure in 2010 of two countries.

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The bar graph depicts the expenditure in 2010 of two countries. inter alia, France and UK on consumer goods over the period of time. In general, the two countries mostly spent their money to buy cars. Moreover, the lowest for the uk to spend money is in the perfume section. France, on the other hand, spent less money to buy cameras. In the cars section the UK spent more of their money, which accounted for approximately 450, 000 pounds in 2010. France spent approximately less 50, 000 pounds than uk. While, in the computer section French spent more than the uk, France spent which accounted for nearly 400, 000 pounds. The UK spent just over 50, 000 pounds less than france. Uk spent their money on cameras and books for roughly the same amount, but in the perfume section uk spend less money, nearly half of it. Moreover, France used their money to buy perfume and cameras nearly the same, but the French spent more money for books which amounted to approximately 300, 000 pounds.

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section
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 for books which amounted to approximately 300, 000 pounds. 