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The line graph depicts the number of car sales from the year 2010 to 2015 by engine type in the US.

The line graph depicts the number of car sales from the year 2010 to 2015 by engine type in the US. BwQqV
The line graph depicts the number of car sales from the year 2010 to 2015 by engine type in the US. There was a moderate increase in electric and LPG engine types. Moreover, diesel engine types rapidly decreased. Petrol, on the other hand, slightly decreased. In 2010 electric cars were the lowest but From 2010 to 2015 the number of car sales in electric engines moderately increased which amounted to approximately more than tenth, while LPG was in the second lowest, but slightly rose over the period of time by nearly twofold but, levelled off over the period of time. Diesel, in 2010 was the second highest, but there was a rapid decrease in the percentage of sales in diesel car engines for nearly over a third over the period of time. But, petrol cars remained steady from the start until the end of the period, approximately over a third.
The line graph depicts the number of
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sales from the year 2010 to 2015

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by
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engine
type in the US. There was a moderate increase in electric and LPG
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engine
types.
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, diesel
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types
rapidly
decreased. Petrol,
on the other hand
,
slightly
decreased.

In 2010 electric
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were the lowest
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From 2010 to 2015 the number of
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sales in electric
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engines
moderately
increased which amounted to approximately more than tenth, while LPG was in the second lowest,
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rose
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, levelled off
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there was a rapid decrease in the percentage of sales in diesel
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car
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