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Notably; İnternational tourism earning was slightly above 8 billion pounds at 2000. At 2020 there is a approximately 1 billion pound increase in southland’s international tourism earnings. As for 2025 there will be a 1 billion pound increase in earnings which makes it southland’s highest income. Meanwhile southland’s meat product export income continuously decreased. To be more specific southland’s meat products export income was 6 billion pounds at 2000 and in 2020 this number decreased about 500 million pounds. According to this bar chart in 2025 southland’s lowest export income will be meat products with 5 billion pounds. Dairy products earnings increased a lot between 2000 and 2020. At the 2000 southland’s dairy products revenue was 7 billion pounds but it increased to 10 billion pounds at 2020 which makes it southland’s highest export income at 2020. But future projection predicts that; southland’s dairy products income will have a slight decrease at 2025. This will make international tourism southland’s highest income at 2025.
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