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The line graph shows the number of people who used different communication services in the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Units: per 100 inhabitants

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The given line graph illustrates how many people used different kind of communication services in the whole world from 1998 to 2008. Overall, the usage of cellular phone services was high in among other services while the use of mobile broadband services was quite low. However, the landline services was almost steady in the whole period. As presented in the line graph in 1998 the percentage of consumption of internet and cellular phone service was almost equally start which was around 5% and over the next few years the cellular service was rapidly increased and the internet service was gradually increased and in 2008 the used of internet services was just 20 percent whereas the cellular phone services was the highest percent of usage which was around 60%. The used of mobile broadband in 1998 was 0% and the next 6 year it was remained same percent after 2004 it was slowly raised and the used of Mobile broadband and fixed broadband was almost same in 2008 which was approximately 5% and the usage of landline service was roughly 15% in 1998 and in 2008 it was somehow increased and the consumption was 19%
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used
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different
kind of communication
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services
in the whole world from 1998 to 2008.

Overall
, the usage of
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cellular
phone
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services
was high in among other
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services
while the
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use
of mobile broadband
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services
was quite low.
However
, the landline
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services
was almost steady in the whole period.

As presented in the line graph in 1998 the percentage of consumption of internet and
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cellular
phone
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service
was almost
equally
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which was around 5% and over the
next
few years the
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cellular
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service
was
rapidly
increased and the internet
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service
was
gradually
increased and in 2008 the
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of internet
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services
was
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just
20 percent whereas the
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cellular
phone
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was the highest percent of usage which was around 60%.

The
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used
of mobile broadband in 1998 was 0% and the
next
6 year it
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same percent after 2004 it was
slowly
raised and the
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used
of Mobile broadband and
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broadband was almost same in 2008 which was approximately 5% and the usage of landline
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service
was roughly 15% in 1998 and in 2008 it was somehow increased and the consumption was 19%
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IELTS academic The line graph shows the number of people who used different communication services in the world.

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4 paragraphs
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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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