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The graph illustrates the number of Coffee in kilograms exported by Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica over the years between 2002 and 2012.

The graph illustrates the number of Coffee in kilograms exported by Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica over the years between 2002 and 2012. gx9wA
The graph illustrates the number of Coffee in kilograms exported by Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica over the years between 2002 and 2012. At the year 2002, the coffee was most exported from Costa Rica at 15 million kilograms followed by Brazil at 12 million kilograms and Colombia at 5 million kilograms. Since then, the number of the coffee exported from Costa Rica started dropping till 2006 while those of Brazil and Colombia were steadily increasing. In period of 2008, Colombian coffee exports dropped down to 3 million kilograms in opposition to Brazil coffee exports which reached 20 million kilograms. Beyond the year 2008, the number of coffee exports increased dramatically and reached its peak at 15 million kilograms but it still cannot surpass those of Brazil and Costa Rica coffee exports which reached 25 million kilograms and 20 million kilograms respectively. Thus, according to the graph, the trend of Brazil coffee exports has the biggest difference between the starting point and the end point of the three countries.
The graph illustrates the number of
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Coffee
in kilograms exported by Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica over the years between 2002 and 2012.

At the year 2002, the
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coffee
was most exported from Costa Rica at 15
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million
kilograms followed by Brazil at 12
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million
kilograms and Colombia at 5
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million
kilograms. Since then, the number of the
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coffee
exported from Costa Rica
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started
dropping till 2006 while those of Brazil and Colombia were
steadily
increasing. In period of 2008, Colombian
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coffee
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exports
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dropped down
to 3
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million
kilograms in opposition to Brazil
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coffee
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exports
which reached 20
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million
kilograms.

Beyond the year 2008, the number of
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coffee
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exports
increased
dramatically
and reached its peak at 15
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million
kilograms
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but
it
still
cannot surpass those of Brazil and Costa Rica
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coffee
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exports
which reached 25
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million
kilograms and 20
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million
kilograms
respectively
.
Thus
, according to the graph, the trend of Brazil
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coffee
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exports
has the biggest difference between the starting point and the
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end
point of the three countries.
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IELTS academic The graph illustrates the number of Coffee in kilograms exported by Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica over the years between 2002 and 2012.

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