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Nokia, Samsung, And others.

Nokia, Samsung, And others. GrkRx

This bar graph compares the number of products sold globally by Samsung, Apple, Nokia, LG, and ZTE, the sales of each brand are given for the years 2009, 2011, and 2013. Overall, most companies saw an increase in sales along the period with the exception of Nokia and LG. Samsung was the best seller by the end of the interval and Nokia came in second and despite a major drop in sales. Samsung's sales has doubled over the period from about 225 in 2009 to 450 in 2013. Apple also saw a growth but no as significant, their sales were around 25 in 2009 and jumped to 150 in 2013. ZTE, on the other hand, saw a very minor increase, starting at 50 sales in 2009 and ending at approximately 70 in 2013. Nokia took a huge loss in sales over the years, and while the initial drop from 2009 to 2011 was small, the sales almost halved from 2011 to 2013 as they dropped from around 425 to 250. The other company that faced a loss is LG, their sales dropped from about 125 in 2009 to about 75 in 2013.

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