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The following graph describes the changes of population in India and China since 2000 till the year 2050.

The following graph describes the changes of population in India and China since 2000 till the year 2050. ELAOD
The following graph describes the changes of population in India and China since 2000 till the year 2050. From the start of the year 2000, China has more population than India. The population of China was 1. 25 billion and the number of citizens in India was 1 billion at that time. From 2000 to the current year 2020, the population of India climbed up moderately and at the same time, there was a steady rise in the number of citizens in China. Between 2015 and 2020, the number of citizens in India increased from 1. 25 billion to 1. 33 billion. On the other hand, the population of China went up to 1. 43 billion from 1. 4 billion by adding 0. 03 billion to the population. According to the estimation by the graph, the population of China will have a steady growth make it to 1. 45 billion by the year 2030. The graph also mentions that Indian population will rise rapidly compared to China population. The population of both countries will become the same in 2030. Eventually, the China population is likely to decrease slowly and hit 1. 4 billion in 2050 while the population of India will apparently make a steady trend and reach 1. 6 billion.
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of
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population
in India and China since 2000 till the
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year
2050.

From the
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start
of the
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2000, China has more
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population
than India. The
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population
of China was 1. 25
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billion
and the number of citizens in India was 1
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billion
at that time. From 2000 to the
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current
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year
2020, the
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population
of India climbed up
moderately
and at the same time, there was a steady rise in the number of citizens in China. Between 2015 and 2020, the number of citizens in India increased from 1. 25
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billion
to 1. 33
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billion
.
On the other hand
, the
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population
of China went up to 1. 43
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billion
from 1. 4
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billion
by adding 0. 03
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billion
to the population.

According to the estimation by the graph, the
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population
of China will have a steady growth
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it to 1. 45
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billion
by the
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year
2030. The graph
also
mentions that Indian
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population
will rise
rapidly
compared to China
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population
. The
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population
of both countries will become the same in 2030.
Eventually
, the China
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population
is likely to decrease
slowly
and hit 1. 4
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billion
in 2050 while the
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population
of India will
apparently
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make
a steady trend and reach 1. 6
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billion
.
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IELTS academic The following graph describes the changes of population in India and China since 2000 till the year 2050.

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