Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

A chart between france and india age measured by percentage

A chart between france and india age measured by percentage 0Ek8B
The chart above shows the age structure for both male and female measured by percentage between France and India in 1984. Overall, the life expectancy in France is higher than India at the age of 85. Additionally, India has a higher percentage between 0-30 age group. The France chart shows that the highest life expectancy for both male and female is at the age of 85. However, women living till this age have a higher percentage than men at 1. 5%. They also take the lead in 65-80 age groups at approximately 2%. While in India, women age 65-80 is lower than 1, 5%. On the other hand, India has a higher percentage than France for people age 0-30. Both genders in this age category have almost identical percentage at about 6%. Children in India age 0-5 has the highest percentage overall at 7% for males and 6. 5% for females. Yet, France percentage for this age group is only 3-4%. This indicates that the population is India is higher than France.
The chart above
shows
the
age
structure for both male

and female measured by
percentage
between France and India

in 1984.
Overall
, the life expectancy in France is higher than

India at the
age
of 85.
Additionally
, India has a higher

percentage between 0-30
age
group.

The France chart
shows
that the highest life expectancy for

both male and female is at the
age
of 85.
However
, women

living till this
age
have a higher
percentage
than
men
at 1. 5%.

They
also
take the lead in 65-80
age
groups at approximately

2%. While in India, women
age
65-80 is lower than 1, 5%.

On the other hand
, India has a higher
percentage
than

France for
people
age
0-30. Both genders in this
age
category

have almost identical
percentage
at about 6%. Children in India

age 0-5 has the highest
percentage
overall
at 7% for males and

6. 5% for females.
Yet
, France
percentage
for this
age
group is

only
3-4%. This indicates that the population is India is higher

than France.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic A chart between france and india age measured by percentage

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
172 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts