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The line graph shows the information for Internet users as percentage of population in three countries from 1999 and 2009.

The line graph shows the information for Internet users as percentage of population in three countries from 1999 and 2009. 26epb
The line graph gives data about the proportion of people using the Internet in three countries-Mexico, Canada and the USA between 1999 and 2009. Overall, there was a gradual increase in the percentages of Internet users among three countries. Mexico was the lowest percentage of those who used Internet over a period of 10 years, while Canada experienced a sharp rise. In 1999, the rate of people using the Internet in the USA was about 24%, which was the highest. In the same year, the figures for that in Canada and Mexico were 10% and 5% respectively. In 2005, Internet usages in both the USA and Canada rose to around 70%, however, the figure for Mexico was over 30%. Until 2010, the percentage of Internet users surprisingly reached a peak of 100%. The figure was about 80% in the USA. On the other hand, Mexico hit a low of about 40%.
The line graph gives data about the proportion of
people
using the Internet in three countries-Mexico, Canada and the USA between 1999 and 2009.
Overall
, there was a gradual increase in the percentages of Internet users among three countries. Mexico was the lowest percentage of those who
used
Internet over a period of 10 years, while Canada experienced a sharp rise. In 1999, the rate of
people
using the Internet in the USA was about 24%, which was the highest. In the same year, the figures for that in Canada and Mexico were 10% and 5%
respectively
.
In
2005, Internet usages in both the USA and Canada rose to around 70%,
however
, the figure for Mexico was over 30%. Until 2010, the percentage of Internet users
surprisingly
reached a peak of 100%. The figure was about 80% in the USA.
On the other hand
, Mexico hit a low of about 40%.
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IELTS academic The line graph shows the information for Internet users as percentage of population in three countries from 1999 and 2009.

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