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The line graph shows the data about the various in outfit export from Colombia, Japan, Myanmar.

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The line graph shows the data about the various in outfit export from Colombia, Japan, Myanmar. Overall, Myanmar was fluctuated when the exports clothing was started, While the other countries just had a gradual fluctuated. Firstly, Myanmar was started to move out the outfit and suddenly having a dramatic increase just for a period at 800 million. Afterward, the number still grew up but just a steady rise to reach a peak in 900 million. However, it was directly a sharp fall from 2001 to 2001 to about 600 million. In addition, the figures rose up again through a year but just a gradual. Secondly, the number of outfits that japan and Columbia were exported about 600 and 400 million, respectively. When it was going through a year, they were faced in 2000 by 500 million. Both countries still went and had a gradual rise through two years but Colombia at 700 million and japan was about 500 million. Nevertheless, those figures have been steadily decreased within 2003.

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shows
 the data about the various in outfit export from Colombia, Japan, Myanmar. Overall
, Myanmar was fluctuated
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started
, While the other countries This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
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 had a gradual fluctuated.

Firstly
, Myanmar was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
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move
 out the outfit and suddenly
 having a dramatic increase This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 for a period at 800 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
. Afterward, the number still
 grew up This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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just
 a steady rise to reach a peak in 900 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
. However
, it was directly
 a sharp fall from 2001 to 2001 to about 600 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
. In addition
, the figures rose up again through a year This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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just
 a gradual.

Secondly
, the number of outfits that japan and Columbia were exported
 about 600 and 400 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
, respectively
. When it was going through a year, they were faced
 in 2000 by 500 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
. Both countries still
 went and had a gradual rise through two years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 Colombia at 700 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 and japan was about 500 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
. Nevertheless
, those figures have been steadily
 decreased within 2003. 