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The graph shows the life expectancy

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This line graph explains the life expectancy of Asians through a long period from past to future. Vividly, people from various areas of Asia are chosen to demonstrate their lifelong hope. Undoubtedly, in past times expectancy significantly raised in all locations. Moreover, these days increasing the expected lifelong is happening gradually and it is expected to adding slightly in future too. It should be noted that the highest life expectancy belongs to people in Western Asia however, the Other South-Central Asia residents have the least hope to live. It is estimated that by 2100 all the individuals live 80 years or longer whilst, in 1950 life expectancy in all regions was 40 or less, except for the Western Asia and Other Eastern Asia which was 52 and 45 respectively. Therefore people's life expectancy will double in around 150 years. Besides, surprisingly, it is speculated that by 2300 all people live at least 90 years. To conclude, the life expectancy of various areas in Asia is growing in an upward trend although, its change is rapidly at first and then the increase is gradual.
This line graph
explains
the
life
expectancy of Asians through a long period from past to future.
Vividly
,
people
from various areas of Asia
are chosen
to demonstrate their lifelong hope.

Undoubtedly
, in past times expectancy
significantly
raised in all locations.
Moreover
, these days increasing the
expected
lifelong is happening
gradually
and it is
expected
to
adding
slightly
in future too.

It should
be noted
that the highest
life
expectancy belongs to
people
in Western Asia
however
, the Other South-Central Asia residents have the least hope to
live
.

It
is estimated
that by 2100 all the individuals
live
80 years or longer whilst, in 1950
life
expectancy in all regions was 40 or less,
except for
the Western Asia and Other Eastern Asia which was 52 and 45
respectively
.
Therefore
people
's
life
expectancy will double in around 150 years.
Besides
,
surprisingly
, it
is speculated
that by 2300 all
people
live
at least 90 years.

To conclude
, the
life
expectancy of various areas in Asia is growing in an upward trend although, its
change
is
rapidly
at
first
and then the increase is gradual.
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