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Electricity consumption in England

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The graph provided here, gives the information about the demand of electricity in England during the winter and the summer season. Along with the graph, a pie chart is also given to summarise how electricity is utilised by households. According to the graph, consumption of electricity in the winter is way greater than that of consumption in the summer. On average, more than 30, 000 units of electricity is used during the winter. On other hand, this figure drops below 20, 000 units per day in the summer. There is a drastic increase in demand for electricity between 9 PM to 10 PM during the winter days. The consumption hits 45, 000 units during this time. However, in the summer nearly 20, 000 units are utilised during the same period of time. In the pie chart, the utilisation of electricity in households is classified in four categories. As per the information given, the largest proportion of the total consumption of electricity is devoted to heating rooms and water. 52. 5% of total units of electricity are utilised for this activity. On the other hand, 17. 5% of electricity is used for Ovens, Kettles and Washing Machines. In the third category lightning, TV and radios are included. They use 15% of total electricity which is the same as the proportion of electricity consumed by vacuum cleaners, food mixtures and electrical tools. In conclusion household in England consume enormous amount of electricity during the winter season and the most of the electricity serve the purpose of hitting the water and rooms
The graph provided here, gives the information about the demand of
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electricity
in England during the
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winter
and the
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summer
season. Along with the graph, a pie chart is
also
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summarise
how
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electricity
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utilised
by households.

According to the graph,
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consumption
of
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electricity
in the
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winter
is way greater than that of
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consumption
in the
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summer
. On average, more than 30, 000
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units
of
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electricity
is
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used
during the
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winter
. On other hand, this figure drops below 20, 000
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units
per day in the
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summer
. There is a drastic increase in demand for
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electricity
between 9 PM to 10 PM during the
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winter
days. The
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consumption
hits 45, 000
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units
during this time.
However
, in the
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summer
nearly
20, 000
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units
are
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utilised
during the same period of time.

In the pie chart, the
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utilisation
of
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electricity
in households
is classified
in four categories. As per the information
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given
, the largest proportion of the total
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consumption
of
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electricity
is devoted
to heating rooms and water. 52. 5% of total
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units
of
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electricity
are
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utilised
for this activity.
On the other hand
, 17. 5% of
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electricity
is
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used
for Ovens, Kettles and Washing Machines. In the third category lightning, TV and radios
are included
. They
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use
15% of total
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electricity
which is the same as the proportion of
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electricity
consumed by vacuum cleaners, food mixtures and electrical tools.

In conclusion
household in England consume enormous amount of
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electricity
during the
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winter
season and the most of the
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electricity
serve the purpose of hitting the water and rooms
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IELTS academic Electricity consumption in England

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4 paragraphs
258 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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