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The bar chart describes the percentage of renewable energy of the total contribution in four countries ( Australia, Germany, Norway and Iceland) in three different years 2000, 2004 and 2007.

The bar chart describes the percentage of renewable energy of the total contribution in four countries ( Australia, Germany, Norway and Iceland) in three different years 2000, 2004 and 2007. D6VoA
The bar chart describes the percentage of renewable energy of the total contribution in four countries ( Australia, Germany, Norway and Iceland) in three different years 2000, 2004 and 2007. Overall, it can be seen that Norway and Iceland are bigger consumers of renewable energy than Australia and Germany over the years. Moreover, Germany had more visible increase in supplying this type of energy comparing to Australia during the years. The usage of renewable energy significantly increased over 60% to nearly 80% during the years in Norway while Iceland used approximately 51% of renewable energy in 2000 and this trend remained at about 55% in 2007 although this country experienced gradual rise in 2004. Germany had a gradual grow in supplying renewable energy in its figures from around 11% to about 19% in 2000 and 2007. The renewable energy was used by Australia the least among the countries and its figures remained steadily at about 10% in these years.
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describes
the percentage of
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renewable
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energy
of the total contribution in four countries
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(
Australia, Germany, Norway and Iceland) in three
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different
years 2000, 2004 and 2007.

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seen
that Norway and Iceland are bigger consumers of
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renewable
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energy
than Australia and Germany over the years.
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, Germany had more visible increase in supplying this type of
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energy
comparing to Australia during the years.

The usage of
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renewable
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energy
significantly
increased over 60% to
nearly
80% during the years in Norway while Iceland
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used
approximately 51% of
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renewable
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energy
in 2000 and this trend remained at about 55% in 2007 although this country experienced gradual rise in 2004.

Germany had a gradual grow in supplying
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renewable
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energy
in its figures from around 11% to about 19% in 2000 and 2007. The
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renewable
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energy
was
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used
by Australia the least among the countries and its figures remained
steadily
at about 10% in these years.
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IELTS academic The bar chart describes the percentage of renewable energy of the total contribution in four countries ( Australia, Germany, Norway and Iceland) in three different years 2000, 2004 and 2007.

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