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The line graph shows the consumption of beef chicken and lamb in europen countries from 1979 to 2000

The line graph shows the consumption of beef chicken and lamb in europen countries from 1979 to 2000 paLea

The information about the consumption of various type of meat in Europen nations during 25 years time period (1979 to 2004) is depicted by the rendered linear representation. To commence with, in 1979, the consumption of beef stood at 201, whereas a slight decrease was seen in the use of it during next decade. until 2004 by showing upward trend it reached to 300. Moreover, the utilize of chicken noticed on 28 in first given 12 months. In contrast, due to gradually inclination it touched to peak as it was 150. Probing further, 45 lambs were eaten by human. On the other, it usage went down by sharply, therefore in last year it was only 25.

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