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The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries Australia, Sweden, Iceland and Turkey.

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The given chart illustrates the proportion of energy which was produced in total energy supply in four countries namely Australia, Sweden, Iceland and Turkey during a thirteen-year period commencing from 1997. Overall, there was an upward trend in the percentage of renewable energy in Iceland and Sweden, with Iceland witnessing a more dramatic rise, while a downward trend was seen in Australia and Turkey. In addition, Iceland consistently had the highest figures throughout the period. The figure for renewable energy in Iceland started at 45% in 1997, after which it experienced a substantial rise to 60% in 2000, before ending the period at 70% in the next ten years. Similar changes could be seen in Sweden, increasing from 5% in 1997 to 6% in 2000 before growing to 9% in 2010. 38% of renewable energy was generated in Turkey in 1997, with a subsequent slight increase decrease to a peak of 40% in 2000 and a final drop to 32% in 2010. Similarly, the percentage of renewable energy in Australia decreased from 9% in 1997 to 8% in 2010, followed by a decline before declining to 6% in 2010.
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supply in four countries
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Australia, Sweden, Iceland and Turkey during a thirteen-year period commencing from 1997.

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, there was an upward trend in the percentage of
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renewable
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energy
in Iceland and Sweden, with Iceland witnessing a more dramatic rise, while a downward trend was
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seen
in Australia and Turkey.
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had the highest figures throughout the period.

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in Iceland
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started
at 45% in 1997, after which it experienced a substantial rise to 60% in 2000,
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ending the period at 70% in the
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ten years. Similar
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changes
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in Sweden, increasing from 5% in 1997 to 6% in 2000
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before
growing to 9% in 2010.

38% of
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renewable
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energy
was generated
in Turkey in 1997, with a subsequent slight increase decrease to a peak of 40% in 2000 and a final drop to 32% in 2010.
Similarly
, the percentage of
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renewable
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energy
in Australia decreased from 9% in 1997 to 8% in 2010, followed by a decline
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declining to 6% in 2010.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries Australia, Sweden, Iceland and Turkey.

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