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The maps illusrate the transformation that the first stage of a museum underwent over a 20 – year period from 1990 to 2010 In general, it is clear that the ground floor experienced considerable alteration with several areas as café, children’s zone, poster place being installed to make way for the mordenization of the museum. Firstly, one significant change was the remodellings toward the archaeology gallery, with two extra added zones comparted both sides of the rooms. In addition, the gift shop accounted for a small area in the upper left corner of the ground, near the statue until it was inserted with a café and turned into a wider area, which the statue then had to relocate to the middle of the grounds. The other change was the establishment of a new mordenized item, lift, located between the café, gift shop and the natural history room. Besides, there used to be a reception counter next to the museum office which now being moved near to the entrance. After all, both of the natural and local history room remain the same.
The maps
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illusrate
the transformation that the
first
stage of a museum underwent over a 20
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–
year period from 1990 to 2010

In general
, it is
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clear
that the
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ground floor
experienced considerable alteration with several areas as café, children’s zone, poster place
being installed
to
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make
way for the
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mordenization
of the museum.

Firstly
, one significant
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change
was the
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remodellings
toward the archaeology gallery, with two extra
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added
zones
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comparted
both sides of the rooms.
In addition
, the gift shop accounted for a
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small
area in the upper
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left
corner of the ground, near the statue until it
was inserted
with a café and turned into a wider area, which the statue then had to relocate to the middle of the grounds.

The other
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change
was the establishment of a new
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mordenized
item, lift, located between the café, gift shop and the natural history room.
Besides
, there
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used
to be a reception counter
next
to the museum office which
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now
being
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moved
near to the entrance.
After all
, both of the natural and local history room remain the same.
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