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The charts give information regarding the tonnage of fruit produced in a farm per month in 2013, the fertiliser used and the monthly rainfall in that year.

The charts give information regarding the tonnage of fruit produced in a farm per month in 2013, the fertiliser used and the monthly rainfall in that year. NwV6j
The charts give information regarding the tonnage of fruit produced in a farm per month in 2013, the fertiliser used and the monthly rainfall in that year. We can see that fruit production rose steadily from just over 2 tonnes in January to a peak of roughly 4. 2 tonnes by August. The output then fell rapidly, declining to around the initial 2-tonne mark in December. However, looking at fertiliser use, we see that this seasonal pattern is largely reversed: the most fertiliser (just under 1 tonne) was utilised in April, followed by a marked decline to zero in June and July. Fertiliser consumption then increased slightly in the autumn, rising to a total of around 0. 7 tonnes before dipping to just below 0. 5 tonnes at year end. Regarding rainfall, this appears to reflect the use of fertiliser, with an early high of 16mm in February, falling consistently to 4mm in July, August and September. Rainfall then increased steadily to reach 14mm in December. In summary, this farm generally employed the most fertiliser at seasons of high rainfall, and by contrast, it produced the most fruit when both rainfall and fertiliser use were around their lowest.
The charts give information regarding the tonnage of fruit produced in a farm per month in 2013, the
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fertiliser
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used
and the monthly
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rainfall
in that year.

We can
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see
that fruit production rose
steadily
from
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over 2 tonnes in January to a peak of roughly 4. 2 tonnes by August. The output then fell
rapidly
, declining to around the initial 2-tonne mark in December.
However
, looking at
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fertiliser
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use
, we
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see
that this seasonal pattern is
largely
reversed: the most
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fertiliser
(
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just
under 1 tonne) was
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utilised
in April, followed by a marked decline to zero in June and July.
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Fertiliser
consumption then increased
slightly
in the autumn, rising to a total of around 0. 7 tonnes
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before
dipping to
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below 0. 5 tonnes at year
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end
.

Regarding
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rainfall
, this appears to reflect the
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use
of
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fertiliser
, with an early high of
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16mm
in February, falling
consistently
to
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4mm
in July, August and September.
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Rainfall
then increased
steadily
to reach
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14mm
in December.

In summary, this farm
generally
employed the most
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fertiliser
at seasons of high
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rainfall
, and by contrast, it produced the most fruit when both
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rainfall
and
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fertiliser
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use
were around their lowest.
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IELTS academic The charts give information regarding the tonnage of fruit produced in a farm per month in 2013, the fertiliser used and the monthly rainfall in that year.

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