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The line graph shows the amount of CFC emissions produced by in Egypt, Poland, Ukraine and Malaysia from 1989 to 2001.

The line graph shows the amount of CFC emissions produced by in Egypt, Poland, Ukraine and Malaysia from 1989 to 2001. jVNmM
The line graph shows the amount of CFC emissions produced by in Egypt, Poland, Ukraine and Malaysia from 1989 to 2001. Overall the amount of CFC emissions have gone down in all countries. Poland and Ukraine had the largest emissions, with 5000 tons and about 4600 tons in 1989. However, over the next few years there was a steep decrease of CFC gases between 1989 and 1995 in two countries, significantly to a low of 900 tons in Ukraine and 1800 tons in Poland. It was far different from the sharp downwards trend, there was a slight decline in the last two countries: Egypt and Malaysia. In Malaysia the amount of gases leveled off over the first six years from 1989 to 1995 and then dropped slowly during the next six years, a low point of 2000 tons in 2001. Similarly, CFC emissions also fell steadily in Egypt which was 2300 tons in 1989 and 1300 tons in 2001.
The line graph
shows
the amount of CFC
emissions
produced by in Egypt, Poland, Ukraine and Malaysia from 1989 to 2001.

Overall
the amount of CFC
emissions
have gone down in all countries. Poland and Ukraine had the largest
emissions
, with 5000 tons and about 4600 tons in 1989.
However
, over the
next
few years there was a steep decrease of CFC gases between 1989 and 1995 in two countries,
significantly
to a low of 900 tons in Ukraine and 1800 tons in Poland.

It was far
different
from the sharp downwards trend, there was a slight decline in the last two countries: Egypt and Malaysia. In Malaysia the amount of gases leveled off over the
first
six years from 1989 to 1995 and then dropped
slowly
during the
next
six years, a low point of 2000 tons in 2001.
Similarly
, CFC
emissions
also
fell
steadily
in Egypt which was 2300 tons in 1989 and 1300 tons in 2001.
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IELTS academic The line graph shows the amount of CFC emissions produced by in Egypt, Poland, Ukraine and Malaysia from 1989 to 2001.

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