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the changes which have been planned for the town of Berkshire.

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The given maps describe the changes which have been planned for the town of Berkshire. In summary, Berkshire will have undergone a drastic transformation from a rural town into an urbanized area in the future. New infrastructures like roads, a car park, a supermarket, and a sports centre will have been added. First and foremost, all the farms from Birshire will have been removed in the days to come. Griffiths Farm, which is in the top right corner of the map, will have been replaced by a supermarket, whereas Hoolahan Farm, which is currently on the right side of McGoldrick Road, will make way for a parking lot. Moreover, the Farmer’s Market, which is beside Corbie Road, will no longer be there in the future. Furthermore, apart from the addition of a roundabout at the junction of McGoldrick Road and That Street, Corbie Road will be extended beyond That Street. The open field at the bottom right of the map will be the venue for the construction of a Sports Center. Together with the removal of the shops from the bottom left, more houses will have been erected.
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In summary, Berkshire will have undergone a drastic transformation from a rural town into an urbanized area in the future. New infrastructures like
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roads
, a car park, a supermarket, and a sports
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centre
will have been
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added
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First
and foremost, all the farms from
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Birshire
will have
been removed
in the days to
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come
. Griffiths Farm, which is in the top right corner of the map, will have
been replaced
by a supermarket, whereas
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Hoolahan
Farm, which is
currently
on the right side of
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McGoldrick
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Road
, will
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make
way for a parking lot.
Moreover
, the Farmer’s Market, which is beside
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Corbie
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Road
, will no longer be there in the future.

Furthermore
, apart from the addition of a roundabout at the junction of
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McGoldrick
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Road
and That Street,
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Corbie
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Road
will
be extended
beyond That Street. The open field at the bottom right of the map will be the venue for the construction of a Sports Center. Together with the removal of the shops from the bottom
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left
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houses
will have
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IELTS academic the changes which have been planned for the town of Berkshire.

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