Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Some people say that with the development of modern technology printed books, magazines lose their importance. To what extent do you agree or not?

Some people say that with the development of modern technology printed books, magazines lose their importance. G9eXw
In this modern era, technology is growing at a faster pace than in the past. It is believed by some that books, magazines and news lose their importance owing to advancement in the digital media. Can books be replaced by high-tech? I completely disagree with this statement, and I believe it has two reasons: limited access to the internet at some places and, along with unreliable information available on the internet. To begin with, having access to printed resources is beneficial for some people who do not have access to the internet connection. That is to say, unfortunately, there are few people in today’s world, who can not afford the expenses of the internet, thus, they depend on printed books and magazines for any information. Newspapers are still one of the most popular sources of information, for instance, in India. As there are many parts in India, where people cannot reach technology. Perhaps more importantly, availability of unreliable information on the internet. To put it simply, one can not totally rely on the information that is available on the internet as it could not be true, which could lead to spreading misleading information among people. Unlike technology, printed materials contain authentic information, which is less likely to misguide people. If books carry information which is not true, the author will face detrimental consequences. Hence, information that is printed not only reliable, but also more authentic than information available online. To conclude, it is argued by some people that printed media is losing its importance due to technological progress. However, I disagree with this as the majority of people have access to books, unlike, technology and information available on books is more reliable.
In this modern era, technology is growing at a faster pace than in the past. It
is believed
by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
, magazines and news lose their importance owing to advancement in the digital media. Can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
be replaced
by high-tech? I completely disagree with this statement, and I believe it has two reasons: limited
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
access
to the internet at
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
places and, along with unreliable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
available
on the internet.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with, having
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
access
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
printed
resources is beneficial for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who do not have
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
access
to the internet connection.
That is
to say, unfortunately, there are few
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
’s world, who can not afford the expenses of the internet,
thus
, they depend on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
printed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
and magazines for any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
. Newspapers are
still
one of the most popular sources of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
,
for instance
, in India. As there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
parts in India, where
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
cannot reach technology.

Perhaps more
importantly
, availability of unreliable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
on the internet. To put it
simply
, one can not
totally
rely on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
that is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
available
on the internet as it could not be true, which could lead to spreading misleading
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
among
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
. Unlike technology,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
printed
materials contain authentic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
, which is less likely to misguide
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
. If
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
carry
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
which is not true, the author will face detrimental consequences.
Hence
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
that is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
printed
not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
reliable,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
more authentic than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
available
online.

To conclude
, it
is argued
by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
printed
media is losing its importance due to technological progress.
However
, I disagree with this as the majority of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
have
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
access
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
, unlike, technology and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
available
on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
is more reliable.

IELTS academic Some people say that with the development of modern technology printed books, magazines lose their importance.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • Some people say that with the development of modern technology printed books, magazines lose their importance. To what extent do you agree or not?