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The line graph shows tge use of oil of major consumers.

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The ostendible line graph details the information about the entire consumption of oil by purchasers of various nations US, China, Western Euorope and Japan and Middle East from 2009 to 2030. The given data has been calibrated in millions of barrels. Having a clear glance, it can be seen that the highest use of lubricant was made by United States 10 millions of barrels per day in 2009 and that figure was remained steady until 2015, however from 2015 to end of the period dramatic decreasing trend was witnessed by England from 10 to 4 millions of barrels lube use per day. Whereas, fuel utilization was 2 millions of barrels per day by China in initial year but after that, continues upward trend was followed by it which was surpassed from remaining nations with nearly 4 millions of barrels per day. Turning to the rest of the information, Middle East buyers used 2 millions of barrels grease in 2009 similar as China though by increasing throughout the years, it was reached at between 2 and 4 millions of barrels petroleum usage which was slightly lower from china. In contrast, in 2009 Western Euorope and Japan were head of China and Middle East regarding lubricant consumption with 4 millions of barrels, on the contrary it was decreased by half of this figure during 2030. Looking from an overall perspective, it can be readily apparent that except Western Europe and Japan increasing pattern was followed by other two remaining countries.
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the information about the entire consumption of oil by purchasers of various nations US, China, Western
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Euorope
and Japan and Middle East from 2009 to 2030. The
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glance, it can be
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that the highest
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use
of lubricant
was made
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10
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per day in 2009 and that figure
was remained
steady until 2015,
however
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end
of the period dramatic decreasing trend
was witnessed
by England from 10 to 4
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lube
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per day. Whereas, fuel utilization was 2
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barrels
per day by China in initial year
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after that, continues upward trend
was followed
by it which
was surpassed
from remaining nations with
nearly
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per day.

Turning to the rest of the information, Middle East buyers
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used
2
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grease in 2009 similar as China though by increasing throughout the years, it
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of
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petroleum usage which was
slightly
lower from
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china
.
In contrast
, in 2009 Western
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Euorope
and Japan were head of China and Middle East regarding lubricant consumption with 4
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of
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,
on the contrary
it
was decreased
by half of this figure during 2030.

Looking from an
overall
perspective, it can be
readily
apparent that except Western Europe and Japan increasing pattern
was followed
by other two remaining countries.
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