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task 1-line graph related to quantity of transported goods in UK

task 1-line graph related to quantity of transported goods in UK 8gQDl

The provided line graph, gives information about amounts of products which had been transported in the United Kingdom via four various transportation system from 1974 to 2002. Overall, It is demonstrated that most of the products were conveyed by road while in contrary, less common way of transporting was conducted though pipelines during this period of time. As far as it is obvious, roads covered 70 million tones of transportation in 1974 while there were fluctuations, finally transferredgoods by road reached approximately to 100 million tones by 2002. Although water transportations roughly kept it's standing on the second stage of popular way of carrying goods, after facing a great growth of about 50 percent from 1974 to 1990, had a decrease about 50 million tones however sharply increased to above 60 million tones by 2002. Although During 1074 to 2002 there were periodic decreases in rail trasportaion portion, by the end of 2002 it kept it's starting in 40 million tones. It should be mentioned that transporting throughpipeline was around 5 million tones in 1974 that summited to more than 20 million tones in 1994 and kept steady to the end of 2002.

The provided line graph, gives information about amounts of products which had been transported
 in the United Kingdom via four various transportation system from 1974 to 2002.

Overall
, It is demonstrated
 that most of the products were conveyed
 by road while in contrary, less common way of transporting was conducted
 though pipelines during this period of time.

As far as it is obvious, roads covered 70 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtimbreinflectionaccentemphasisresonance
tones
 of transportation in 1974 while there were fluctuations, finally
Possible spelling mistake found.transferred goods
transferredgoods
 by road reached approximately to 100 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtimbreinflectionaccentemphasisresonance
tones
 by 2002. Although water transportations roughly This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 it's standing on the second stage of popular way of carrying This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
, after facing a great growth of about 50 percent from 1974 to 1990, had a decrease about 50 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtimbreinflectionaccentemphasisresonance
tones
however
sharply
 increased to above 60 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
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tones
 by 2002.

Although During 1074 to 2002 there were periodic decreases in rail Possible spelling mistake found.transportation
trasportaion
 portion, by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of 2002 it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
Did you mean "its" (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (short form of 'it is')?its
it's
 starting in 40 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtimbreinflectionaccentemphasisresonance
tones
. It should be mentioned
 that transporting Possible spelling mistake found.through pipeline
throughpipeline
 was around 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtimbreinflectionaccentemphasisresonance
tones
 in 1974 that summited to more than 20 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtimbreinflectionaccentemphasisresonance
tones
 in 1994 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 steady to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of 2002. 