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a lime graph related to quantity of transporting goods from UK since 1974 to 2002

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The provided line graph, gives information about amounts of products which had been transported in United Kingdom via four different transportation system from 1974 to 2002. Overal, during It is demonstrated that most of the products were conveyed by road while in contrary, less common way of tranporting was conducted though pipelines during this period of time. As far as it is obvious, roads covered 70 million tones of transportation in 1974 while there was a fluctuations, finally tranferred goods by road reached approximately to 100 million tones by 2002. Although water transportations roughly kept it's standing on the second stage of popular way of carrying goods, after facing a great growth of about 50 percent from 1974 to 1990, had a decrease about 50 million tones however sharply incresed to above 60 million tones by 2002. Although During 1074 to 2002 there were periodic decraeses in rail trasportaion portion, by the end of 2002 it kept it's starting in 40 million tones. It should be mentioned that transpoting through pipeline was around 5 million tones in 1974 that summited to more than 20 million tones in 1994 and kept steady to the end of 2002.
The provided line graph, gives information about amounts of products which had
been transported
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in United Kingdom
via four
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different
transportation system from 1974 to 2002.

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Overal
, during It
is demonstrated
that most of the products
were conveyed
by road while in contrary, less common way of
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tranporting
was conducted
though pipelines during this period of time.

As far as it is obvious, roads covered 70
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million
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tones
of transportation in 1974 while there was
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a fluctuations
,
finally
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tranferred
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goods
by road reached approximately to 100
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million
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tones
by 2002. Although water transportations roughly
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kept
it's standing on the second stage of popular way of carrying
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goods
, after facing a great growth of about 50 percent from 1974 to 1990, had a decrease about 50
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million
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tones
however
sharply
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incresed
to above 60
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million
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tones
by 2002.

Although During 1074 to 2002 there were periodic
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decraeses
in rail
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trasportaion
portion, by the
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end
of 2002 it
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kept
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it's
starting in 40
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million
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tones
. It should
be mentioned
that
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transpoting
through pipeline was around 5
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million
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tones
in 1974 that summited to more than 20
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million
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tones
in 1994 and
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kept
steady to the
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end
of 2002.
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