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n the proprtion of household car ownership in The UK, over course 41 years, from 1990 to 2030.

n the proprtion of household car ownership in The UK, over course 41 years, from 1990 to 2030. bDEqX
The line chart compares and contrasts data on the changes in the proportion of household car ownership in The UK, over course 41 years, from 1990 to 2030. A closer look at the line chart highlights the fact that the figures of one car and two or more cars witnessed increases, the opposite was true for that of no car throughout the period shown. As can be seen from the line chart, the percentage of household no car started with over 50% in 1990, but later decreased sharply to 30% in 2010. However, the proportion of household no car stayed stable at 30% from 2010 to 2020 before being expected to drop roughly 15% in 2030. In the meantime, the rate of household one car started at approximately 35% in 1990 which was followed by an increase of over 5% in 2015. Also, The figure is predicted to fluctuate at over 40% over 15 years from 2015 to 2030. Meanwhile, the period 1990- 2005 saw a small fluctuation at around 10% in the figure for household two or more cars. However, a sharp growth of just over 25% was seen from 2005 to 2015. In the following year, the percentage of household two or more cars remained unchanged at just over 25%, they are then expected to climb to over 40% until 2030.
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ownership in The UK,
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course 41 years, from 1990 to 2030.

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car
and two or more
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cars
witnessed increases, the opposite was true for that of no
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car
throughout the period shown.

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seen
from the line chart, the percentage of
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household
no
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started
with
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50% in 1990,
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later decreased
sharply
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, the proportion of
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no
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stayed stable at 30% from 2010 to 2020
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before
being
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expected
to drop roughly 15% in 2030.

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started
at approximately 35% in 1990 which
was followed
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5% in 2015.
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40%
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15 years from 2015 to 2030.

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1990- 2005
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fluctuation at around 10% in the figure for
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two or more
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.
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, a sharp growth of
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25% was
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seen
from 2005 to 2015. In the following year, the percentage of
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two or more
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remained unchanged at
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25%, they are then
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40% until 2030.

IELTS academic n the proprtion of household car ownership in The UK, over course 41 years, from 1990 to 2030.

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