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The pie chart illustrates how much imports both India and China received from different EU countries in 2000 and 2011. Information of both the countries are given on different pie-charts.

The pie chart illustrates how much imports both India and China received from different EU countries in 2000 and 2011. Information of both the countries are given on different pie-charts. 0p60q
The pie chart illustrates how much imports both India and China received from different EU countries in 2000 and 2011. Information of both the countries are given on different pie-charts. Overall, Germany has seen a major surge over the given period in its exports to India and China whereas United Kingdom has seen a decline in its exports to both the nation. Austria, Sweden, Spain and Finland have a tiny contribution to the exports and also, no major changes were seen in their proportion in the given time period. If we compare Germany’s exports to India in 2000 and 2011, there is a considerable increase from 15% to 25% respectively. In addition, China’s imports from Germany took a surge from 38% to 48%. Exports of goods to Indian from United Kingdom took a huge dip (29% to 13%) as compared to British exports to China (9% to 7%). Also, Austria, Sweden, Spain and Finland all have exported less than or equal to 3% to India and China in both years.
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to India in 2000 and 2011, there is a considerable increase from 15% to 25%
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to China (9% to 7%).

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IELTS academic The pie chart illustrates how much imports both India and China received from different EU countries in 2000 and 2011. Information of both the countries are given on different pie-charts.

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