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The line graph shows female and male and graduate in canada from 1992 to 2007

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The line graph describes the total number of men and women who graduated from the University in canada between the years 1992 to 2007. Overall, it can be evident from the given graph that, the female accounted the highest numbers whereas the male had gradually less counts in all the given years. To commence with, in 1992 there were almost 1 lakh female graduates, which rose to 105, 000 in between the years 1994 to 1996. However, it got a slight decrease from 1995 upto the year 2000. On the contrary, it got a hike of 30, 000 and reached 130, 000 in 2005. Moreover, at the end of the given time span the total count of women graduates in canada was nearly around 149, 000 which was all time highest as compared to men. In terms of men, their were 70, 000 male candidates who graduated from the University in 1992, which noticed a slight increase and were approximately 79, 000 in 1995. Likewise, female after 1995 men counts also drastically fell upto the year 2001. But, after 2001, it significantly rose and were about 105, 000 in the year 2006, which were 45, 000 less than the female by comparision.
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between the years 1992 to 2007.
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graduates, which rose to 105, 000 in between the years 1994 to 1996.
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a slight decrease from 1995
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2000.
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, their were 70, 000 male candidates who graduated from the University in 1992, which noticed a slight increase and were approximately 79, 000 in 1995.
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after 1995
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