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the number of foreign tourists to three different areas in a European country from 1987 to 2007

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The line graph shows the number of foreign tourists to three different areas in a European country from 1987 to 2007, in five-yearly intervals. In general, three regions all attracted many overseas visitors until the year 2002 that a significant change in these trends took place. Within 1987 to 1992, there was a slight decrease in the number of tourists to the coasts from 40000 to 35000. However, people who came to the lakes and mountains rose rapidly from 10000 to 25000, 20000 to 28000, respectively. The period within 1992 to 2002 witnessed a quick recovery in the number of tourists to the coasts by 27000 visits. Especially, the figure of tourists the lakes increased dramatically to reach a peak of 75000. In addition, there was a fluctuation in the figure for people of people traveling to the mountain and reaching around 30000 in 2002. Between 2002 to 2007, the number visiting the lakes dropped sharply from 75000 to 50000 visits. By contrast, this period, experienced an upward trend in the figure of foreign visitors to the coats and mountains from 62000 to 75000, 30000 to 35000 visits.

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number
 visiting the lakes dropped sharply
 from 75000 to 50000 visits. By contrast, this period, experienced an upward trend in the figure of foreign visitors to the coats and mountains from 62000 to 75000, 30000 to 35000 visits. 