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Different types of fuels consumed by different countries

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The tables depict, how electricity generate in various Asian countries showing different percentages of fuel consumed for this reason, in 2005. It also illustrates various forms of fluctuations in fuel consumption percentage rate. Overall it has observed that, out of various kinds of fuels available for electricity generation, coal and lignite are maximum consumed by Malaysia, leader of nuclear consumption is Japan, petroleum products are top most used by Thailand, usage of Hydro and wind is major in South Korea, whereas there are fuels as well of which Thailand is again the maximum consumer. We come to know by this that, Percentage of nuclear energy is maximum in Japan which is 49% however, it is nil in Thailand. Similarly, the percentage rate of coal and lignite is highest about 61% in Malaysia and minimum in Thailand up to 3%. It is also noticed from this research that, South Korea has generated electricity largely from Hydro and wind which is 48% and has used only 3% of petroleum. Last but not the least, There are other fuels as well and various countries has consumed it in different percentages.
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forms of fluctuations in
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it has observed that, out of
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available for electricity generation, coal and lignite are maximum consumed by Malaysia, leader of nuclear consumption is Japan, petroleum products are top most
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by Thailand, usage of Hydro and wind is major in South Korea, whereas there are
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of which Thailand is again the maximum consumer.

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of nuclear energy is maximum in Japan which is 49%
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, it is nil in Thailand.
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, the
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rate of coal and lignite is highest about 61% in Malaysia and minimum in Thailand up to 3%.

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also
noticed from this research that, South Korea has generated electricity
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from Hydro and wind which is 48% and has
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IELTS academic Different types of fuels consumed by different countries

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