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ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The picture below shows how a hot balloon works. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The picture below shows how a hot balloon works. OM0g7
This diagram illustrates the working proceedure of the hot baloon. Overall itcan be seen that their are three stages forworking of the hot baloon. Begining with the burner and ending with the parachute valve. It can also be seen in some stage complex equipment has been used. Firstly hot baloon consists of Envelope which is tied to the basket with the help of rope. The basket itself consists of the main body part that is 'Burner'. Burner has the complex equipment called propane cylinder. In the burner the burning takes place and then with the help of propane cylinder, it mixes propane with air to produce flame by which the hot air can be produced. As the cooler air is heavy so it settels down at the bottom of the balloon and tends to push the hotter air in the upward direction at the top most level of the baloon as it is lighter in weight. Here comes the parachute valve into picture as it is the reason why balloon tends to fly. This valve is a self-sealing valve which allows the hot air to escape very precisely. Thus the hot balloon are able to fly.
This diagram illustrates the working
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proceedure
of the hot
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baloon
.

Overall
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itcan
be
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seen
that
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their
are three stages
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forworking
of the hot
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baloon
.
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Begining
with
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the


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burner
and ending with the parachute
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valve
. It can
also
be
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seen
in
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some
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stage
complex equipment has been
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used
.

Firstly
hot
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baloon
consists of Envelope which
is tied
to the basket with the
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help
of rope. The basket itself consists of the main body part
that is
'Burner'. Burner has the complex
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equipment


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called
propane cylinder.

In the burner the burning takes place and then with the
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help
of propane cylinder, it mixes propane with
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air
to produce flame by which the hot
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air
can
be produced
. As the cooler
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air
is heavy
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so
it
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settels
down at the bottom of the balloon and tends to push the hotter
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air
in the upward direction at the top most level of the
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baloon
as it is
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lighter in weight
. Here
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comes
the parachute
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valve
into picture as it is the reason why balloon tends to
fly
. This
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valve
is a self-sealing
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valve
which
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allows
the hot
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air
to escape
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very
precisely
.
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Thus
the hot balloon are able to
fly
.
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IELTS academic ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The picture below shows how a hot balloon works.

Academic
  American English
6 paragraphs
196 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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