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Information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit ( Turkey, Greece, USA, Spain, France) were demonstrated by the charts.

Information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit ( Turkey, Greece, USA, Spain, France) were demonstrated by the charts. 3bWEl
Information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit ( Turkey, Greece, USA, Spain, France) were demonstrated by the charts. Overall, there is an increasing trend for the number of people visiting to and from the UK during this period. In addition, France welcomed the most UK visitors in 1999 while Turkey was the least popular of these five countries visited by UK residents. In detail, in 1979, there were merely over 10 million UK residents travelling abroad then this number gradually increased to 20 million people in 1985. By 1985, visits abroad by UK citizens sharply grew, peaking at in excess of 50 million visitors in 1999. In 1979, 10 million overseas residents arrived in the UK to travel. This number slowly rose to roughly 12 millions before remarkably increasing after 1985, reaching the highest point of nearly 30 million visitors in 1999. In 1999, France led the way with 13 million of visitors from the UK, Spain came second at approximately 10 million of residents. Finally, the number of UK visitors traveling to the USA, Turkey, Greece were 4 million, 3. 5 million, and 2 million respectively.
Information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK
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residents
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(
Turkey, Greece, USA, Spain, France)
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by the charts.

Overall
, there is an increasing trend for the
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number
of
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people
visiting to and from the UK during this period.
In addition
, France welcomed the most UK
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visitors
in 1999 while Turkey was the least popular of these five countries visited by UK residents.

In detail, in 1979, there were
merely
over 10
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million
UK
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residents
travelling abroad then this
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number
gradually
increased to 20
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million
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people
in 1985. By 1985, visits abroad by UK citizens
sharply
grew, peaking at in excess of 50
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million
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visitors
in 1999. In 1979, 10
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million
overseas
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residents
arrived in the UK to travel. This
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number
slowly
rose to roughly 12
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millions
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before
remarkably
increasing after 1985, reaching the highest point of
nearly
30
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million
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visitors
in 1999.

In 1999, France led the way with 13
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million
of
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visitors
from the UK, Spain came second at approximately 10
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million
of
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residents
.
Finally
, the
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number
of UK
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visitors
traveling to the USA, Turkey, Greece were 4
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, 3. 5
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million
, and 2
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million
respectively
.
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IELTS academic Information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit ( Turkey, Greece, USA, Spain, France) were demonstrated by the charts.

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6.5
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