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The given picture illustrates the stages in the recycling of glass bottles.It is clear that seven steps are involved in the process.

The given picture illustrates the stages in the recycling of glass bottles. It is clear that seven steps are involved in the process. x8xrN
The given picture illustrates the stages in the recycling of glass bottles. It is clear that seven steps are involved in the process. In the first step, glass bottles are collected from the public and segregated into green, brown and clear colours. In the second step, they are transported to the processing plant where classification is done based on the metal and plastic caps, which are removed. In the fourth step, the glass is broke and then in the fifth step, this broken glass is transported by car to a glass factory where there is a furnace in which glass and other raw materials are mixed and heated at 1200 degree C. In the seventh and final step, the melted mixture is then used to make new glass bottles in the glass factory. Overall, it can be seen that recycling of glass bottles is a long and tedious process involving many steps
The
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picture illustrates the stages in the recycling of
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glass
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bottles
. It is
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clear
that seven
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steps
are involved
in the process.

In the
first
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step
,
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glass
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bottles
are collected
from the public and segregated into green, brown and
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clear
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colours
. In the second
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step
, they
are transported
to the processing plant where classification
is done
based on the metal and plastic caps, which
are removed
.
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In
the fourth
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step
, the
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glass
is broke and then in the fifth
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step
, this broken
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glass
is transported
by car to a
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glass
factory where there is a furnace in which
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glass
and other raw materials
are mixed
and heated at 1200 degree C. In the seventh and final
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step
, the melted mixture is then
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used
to
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make
new
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glass
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bottles
in the
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glass
factory.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that recycling of
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glass
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bottles
is a long and tedious process involving
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many
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steps
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IELTS academic The given picture illustrates the stages in the recycling of glass bottles. It is clear that seven steps are involved in the process.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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