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The line graph reveals information about the percentage of the polutation watched TV and listened to the radio during the day-time and night- time. This study has been realised among the UK polutation from October to December 1992 Conspicuously, people prefered to listen to the radio in the morning while many of them spent evening watching TV. Over 24 hours period, the number of TV viewers were higher than those listening to the radio To begin with radio, about 5% of people who were over four years old listened to the radio at 1: 00. This percentage remained about unchanged until at 6: 00. During the period from 7: 00 to 9: 00 maximum proportion of UK people listened to the radio accounting for 25%, but the number decreased continuously after 9: 00 and recorded aproxmately 5% at 24: 00 Furthermore, with TV, the percentage fluctuated in between 7% to 10% from 1: 00 until 11: 00. The proportion of the UK population followed the upward trend from noon and touched its peak point recorded as about 45% at 21: 00 before declining to 15% at 24: 00

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polutation
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watched
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radio
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polutation
 from October to December 1992

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people
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prefered
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radio
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many
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begin
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radio
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people
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old
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radio
 at 1: 00. This percentage remained about unchanged until at 6: 00. During the period from 7: 00 to 9: 00 maximum proportion of UK This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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radio
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but
 the number decreased continuously
 after 9: 00 and recorded Possible spelling mistake found.approximately
aproxmately
 5% at 24: 00

Furthermore
, with TV, the percentage fluctuated in between 7% to 10% from 1: 00 until 11: 00. The proportion of the UK population followed the upward trend from noon and touched its peak point recorded as about 45% at 21: 00 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 declining to 15% at 24: 00