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The line graph isllustrates average carbon dioxide discharge per person in the United Kingdom , Sweden, Italy and Portugal over period of 40 years.

The line graph isllustrates average carbon dioxide discharge per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal over period of 40 years. XyVEw
The line graph isllustrates average carbon dioxide discharge per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal over period of 40 years. Overall, cacbon dioxide emissions in the United Kingdom and Sweden reduced over the period whereas Italy and Portugal increased. In 1967, around 11 tonnes cacbon dioxide came from the United Kingdom, followed by 9 tonnes in Sweden. Italy follows Sweden with discharge of more than 4 tonnes and the lowest in Portugal with more than 1 tonnes of emissions per year. From that time onwards, United Kingdom carbon dioxide emissions have been reduced to 9 tonnes. Unlike the UK, emissions in Italy have increased by 8 tonnes. In Sweden, discharge reduced by 6 tonnes and Portugal climbed by almost 6 tonnes in 2007.
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Kingdom, followed by 9 tonnes in Sweden. Italy follows Sweden with discharge of more than 4 tonnes and the lowest in Portugal with more than 1 tonnes of
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in Italy have increased by 8 tonnes. In Sweden, discharge
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by 6 tonnes and Portugal climbed by almost 6 tonnes in 2007.
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IELTS academic The line graph isllustrates average carbon dioxide discharge per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal over period of 40 years.

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