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The graphs give information about proportion of water’s consuming for various reasons in six regions around the world.

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The graphs give information about proportion of water’s consuming for various reasons in six regions around the world. It can be seen from the graphs, Central Asia took the highest level of using water for Agriculture, follow by that is Europe with the most common in terms of consuming water for Industrial while the biggest figure for the Domestic Use has belonged to South America. Looking in detail, Africa, Central Asia and also Soth East Asia are one of the popular countries using water for Agriculture while Central Asia occupy the most common with 88% whislt the others one higher than 80%. In detail, Europe rank the first place as regards Industrial Use with 53% that is much more 5% than North America. Moreover, starting at 10%, the proportion of South America twice as much as Central Asia. Especially, standing at penultimate place with 7% fit Africa that fewer 5% compa withUsing water for Domestic took the smallest rate in six countries. The percentage of Domestic use in South America with 19%, a half of its number be component of Africa. There is a similarity between North America and Europe make up 13% and 15%, respectively. However, the figure for Central Asia and South East Asia tend to be fairly similar reach 7%.
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IELTS academic The graphs give information about proportion of water’s consuming for various reasons in six regions around the world.

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