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The line graph provides the figure of waste produced by 3 company ( A ,B,C) IN A 15-year interval

The line graph provides the figure of waste produced by 3 company ( A, B, C) IN A 15-year interval mXMmL
The line graph provides the figure of waste produced by 3 company ( A, B, C) IN A 15-year interval. Overall, there were a big changes of the amount of waste produced by all three firm. The companies A nd B saw a remarkbly declined by of waste produced drung 15 year period while the waste production by company C was rapid increased. In the year of 2000, the company A manufactured 12 tones of waste produced where as companies B and C produced around 8 tones and 4 tones in waste. Over the half decade, the wast production in stones in the firm B and C was gradual growth about 2 tones but the number of waste produced for the firm A dropped around 1 tone. From 2005 to 2015, the company A went down in the wast produced over 3 tones (12 tones to 9 tones), and the wast output of Company B dramatically plummeted approximately 7 tones. By contrast, despite starting at the smallest amount of wast production, company C witnessed a intensely soard over 10 tones in waste in 2015
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A, B, C) IN A 15-year interval.

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C was rapid increased.

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A manufactured 12
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. Over the half decade, the wast production in stones in the firm B and C was gradual growth about 2
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for the firm A dropped around 1 tone.

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A went down in the wast
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IELTS academic The line graph provides the figure of waste produced by 3 company ( A, B, C) IN A 15-year interval

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