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nyway, the side, which I was visiting with a few of my friends during the summertime couple of years ago, was protected by bric

nyway, the side, which I was visiting with a few of my friends during the summertime couple of years ago, was protected by bric 0wrr9
The two maps illustrate on island before and after the making of few visitors facilities. Overall, it can be observed that there is used changing occurred in this area, there were only few trees, a sea, and beach, this hundred meters of land completely change by tourists. In the terms of first map, there was average number of trees on east side and few of the west, on the west corner there was small beach while outside of this land is sea. Moreover, india s map as we can see that in the centre of north-east around 10 to 11 houses made by them, they are linked with Footpath as well in a round shape, on the left side of these houses they built restaurant at note from that the view of see is clearly visible for customers to enjoy, including the reception in front of dad restaurant + interesting thing is that the reception is surrounded by vehicle track, that also links with pier, the gate is open for backpackers to swim. Furthermore, on north on east side they constructed 526 houses for accommodation with facility of automobile track as well the pictures also shows that there is some ships as well in the sea for people to enjoy the Sea.
The two maps illustrate on island
before
and after the making of few visitors facilities.

Overall
, it can
be observed
that there is
used
changing occurred in this area, there were
only
few trees, a sea, and beach, this hundred meters of land completely
change
by tourists.

In the terms of
first
map, there was average number of trees on east side and few of the west, on the west corner there was
small
beach while
outside of
this land is sea.

Moreover
,
india
s map as we can
see
that in the
centre
of north-east around 10 to 11
houses
made by them, they
are linked
with Footpath
as well
in a round shape, on the
left
side of these
houses
they built restaurant at note from that the view of
see
is
clearly
visible for customers to enjoy, including the reception in front of dad restaurant + interesting thing is that the reception
is surrounded
by vehicle
track
, that
also
links with pier, the gate is open for backpackers to swim.

Furthermore
, on north on east side they constructed 526
houses
for accommodation with facility of automobile
track
as well
the pictures
also
shows
that there is
some
ships
as well
in the sea for
people
to enjoy the Sea.
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IELTS academic nyway, the side, which I was visiting with a few of my friends during the summertime couple of years ago, was protected by bric

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