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The line graph illustrates the variations in population growth changed by India and China between 2000 and 2050.

The line graph illustrates the variations in population growth changed by India and China between 2000 and 2050. 7WRe5
The line graph illustrates the variations in population growth changed by India and China between 2000 and 2050. The information is measured in billions. Over the 50-year period, China will hit the peak in 2030 and then begins to fall till 2050. On the other hand, India climb steadily in its population growth and over the period of 2030, India will overtake China. According to the graph, there were more people living in China than in India in 2000. China populations was 1. 25 billions, while the number of Indian citizens were only about 1 billions. From 2000 to 2030, there was a significant rise in China populations, while India made a gradual jump in its populations. From 2020to 2025, there has been a slight rise in the number of citizens to reach over 1. 43 billions, while Indian populations has jumped from 1. 33 billions to 1. 4 billions. China reached the peak of 1. 45 billions in 2030 and Experts say that Indian populations will probably increase more quickly than China populations Both countries will meet the same populations in 2030. After 2030, China populations dip slightly and reach about 1. 4 billions in 2050. India will have a steady rise till 2050 and reach a high of 1. 6 billions.
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by India and China between 2000 and 2050. The information
is measured
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billions
. Over the 50-year period, China will hit the peak in 2030 and then
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begins
to fall till 2050.
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population
growth and over the period of 2030, India will overtake China. According to the graph, there were more
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people
living in China than in India in 2000. China
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populations
was 1. 25
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billions
, while the number of Indian citizens were
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only
about 1
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billions
. From 2000 to 2030, there was a significant rise in China
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populations
, while India made a gradual jump in its
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populations
. From 2020to 2025, there has been a slight rise in the number of citizens to reach over 1. 43
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billions
, while Indian
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populations
has jumped from 1. 33
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billions
to 1. 4
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billions
. China reached the peak of 1. 45
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billions
in 2030 and Experts say that Indian
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populations
will
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than China populations Both countries will
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meet
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populations
in 2030. After 2030, China
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dip
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in 2050. India will have a steady rise till 2050 and reach a high of 1. 6
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the variations in population growth changed by India and China between 2000 and 2050.

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