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Describe an old person you know and respect

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I know many old person in my life and I really respect of them but here I would like to talk about a special person which is really a old person and I really respect of her her name is Renu Bala she is really a good person for me I knew about this person when ever when I took admission in my first year of the graduation that I will face a lot of problem regarding to understand the eulogy concept clearly we not that zoology demands from US to make a diagram need and clearly we cannot get marks without the explanation with the diagrams so definitely we have to overcome this problem with the help of these someone expert who have that knowledge regarding it so that time I knew about Renu wala when my one of the closest teacher her name is amandeep Kaur she give me advice I can 2 question from Renu Bala she is really a good teacher and she was also a professor of my college and recently she is she was retired from her job and I knew anything about her she is excellent teacher she done their duty with full of honesty she also spend there pension with those people who is need for that and I really respect of her because she is have a definite about anything I am I can overcome my zoology fear or also another year fear
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Renu
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Bala
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for me I knew about this
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when ever when I took admission in my
first
year of the graduation that I will face
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a lot of problem
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regarding to
understand the eulogy concept
clearly
we not that zoology demands from US to
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marks without the explanation with the diagrams
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definitely we
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these someone
expert who have that knowledge regarding it
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that time I knew about
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amandeep
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Kaur
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was retired
from her job and I knew anything about her she
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teacher she done their duty with full of honesty she
also
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spend
there pension with those
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respect of her
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because
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have
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about anything I am I can overcome my zoology fear or
also
another year fear
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IELTS academic Describe an old person you know and respect

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5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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