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a picture shows the plan of two parks im 1920 and at present.Summarise the main feature and make comparision

a picture shows the plan of two parks im 1920 and at present. Summarise the main feature and make comparision x0pl1

The above picture represents the plans of a park which was first opened in the year 1920. The former and the latter are the plans in 1920 and at present respectively. The name of the park is grange park. The former park had its entrance at Arnold avenue and Eldon street. Seats were provided next near rose garden. In addition there was a platform where musicians performed. Seating arrangements were made near to the stage. At the center of the park, there existed a fountain. Also there was a pond whose water is taken for watering. A glasshouse was located next to the entrance from eldon street. There are some changes in today’s plan of the park. The pond was replaced by children’s play area and a café next to it. On the contrary, there is a rose garden instead of fountain. People can be made comfortable with the seat provided. Similarly, there is an amphitheatre for concerts. Underground car parking is now available. There is a water feature next to children’s play area. But there are some similarities like the entrance remains the same and rose garden is also located next to entrance from Arnold revenue. These changes helps to increase the people’s attraction towards the park.

The above picture represents the plans of a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 which was first
 opened in the year 1920. The former and the latter are the plans in 1920 and at present respectively
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 name of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 is grange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 former You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 had its You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
entrance
 at Arnold avenue and Eldon street. Seats were provided
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlater
next
 near rose garden. In Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?addition,
addition
 there was a platform where musicians performed. Seating arrangements were made
 near to the stage. At the center of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, there existed a fountain. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 there was a pond whose water is taken
 for watering. A glasshouse was located
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next
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
entrance
 from Possible spelling mistake found.EldonEltonWeldonElon
eldon
 street.

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some
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changes
 in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
’s plan of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. The pond was replaced
 by children’s play area and a café You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlater
next
 to it. On the contrary
, there is a rose garden instead
 of fountain. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
 can be made
 comfortable with the seat provided. Similarly
, there is an Possible spelling mistake. 'amphitheatre' is British English.amphitheater
amphitheatre
 for concerts. Underground car parking is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 available. There is a water feature You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlater
next
 to children’s play area. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 similarities like the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
entrance
 remains the same and rose garden is also
 located You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlater
next
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
entrance
 from Arnold revenue.

These This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
You should probably use "help".help
helps
 to increase the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
’s attraction towards the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
. 