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The line graph illustrates the changes of coffee export levels in three countries between 2002 and 2012.

The line graph illustrates the changes of coffee export levels in three countries between 2002 and 2012. 6lb58
The line graph illustrates the changes of coffee export levels in three countries between 2002 and 2012. And it is measured in millions of kilograms. Overall, the levels of all coffee exports rose in all three countries(Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica) in final year 2012. Brazil and Costa Rica produced the most coffee. They start at a fairly similar level of between 12 and 15 millions kiligrams in 2002. The coffee exports from Brazil rosed gradually over the following four years and decreased moderately and then rised to 25 million. While the exports from Costa Rica experienced a significant fall to around 7. 5 million and fluctuated slightly and then rised to 20 million. However, they both followed a similar trend. Colombia had a more erratic pattern of exports than the other two countries. The exports stood at 5 million kilograms in 2002, which was lower than Brazil and Costa Rica. And then, Colombia overtook Costa Rica in 2006 with exports reaching 12 million but there was a sharp fall exports to a low hit with 2. 5 miliion in 2008. Following this, exports peaked rapidly to finish the period at 15 million.
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levels in three countries between 2002 and 2012. And it
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of kilograms.

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rose in all three countries(Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica) in final year 2012.

Brazil and Costa Rica produced the most
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. They
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in 2002. The
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from Brazil
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rosed
gradually
over the following four years and decreased
moderately
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rised
to 25 million.

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from Costa Rica experienced a significant fall to around 7. 5
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million
and fluctuated
slightly
and then
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rised
to 20
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However
, they both followed a similar trend.

Colombia had a more erratic pattern of
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exports
than the other two countries.

The
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stood at 5
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million
kilograms in 2002, which was lower than Brazil and Costa Rica.

And then, Colombia overtook Costa Rica in 2006 with
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reaching 12
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there was a sharp fall
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to a low hit with 2. 5
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in 2008. Following this,
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peaked
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the changes of coffee export levels in three countries between 2002 and 2012.

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