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Money spent on books in European countries between 1995 and 2005.

Money spent on books in European countries between 1995 and 2005. KV3r3
The graph gives information on how much money people in four European countries allocated to purchase books between 1995 and 2005. Overall, it is evident that the amount of spending on books grew in all four countries over the entire period, with Germany being the biggest spender and Austria enjoying the sharpest rise. However, the figures for the other two did not change much. Turning to the details, Germany spent a significantly higher sum of money on books. Starting at $ 80 million in 1995, it had reached a peak of almost 95 million dollars by 2005, seeing slight fluctuations between the two periods. Similarly, a marked rise can be observed in the figures for Austria. It rose slightly from $30, 000, 000 to $40, 000, 000 in the first six years but had soared to just above 70 million US dollars by the end of the decade. By contrast, the rise in book sales in France and Italy was much less sharp. While there was a moderate increase in the quantity of spending in the former, which climbed from well over 50 million in 1995 to roughly 75 million in 2005, the money channeled to buy books in Italy went up only slightly, rising from $50 million in 1995 to over 60, 000, 000 in 2005.
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people
in four European

countries allocated to
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purchase
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books
between 1995 and 2005.

Overall
, it is evident that the amount of spending on
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books
grew in all four

countries over the entire period, with Germany being the biggest spender and Austria enjoying the sharpest rise.
However
, the figures for the other two did not
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change
much.

Turning to the
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details
, Germany spent a
significantly
higher sum of money on
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books
. Starting at
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$ 80
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million
in 1995, it had reached a peak of almost 95
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million
dollars by 2005, seeing slight fluctuations between the two periods.
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, a marked rise can
be observed
in the figures for Austria. It rose
slightly
from $30, 000, 000 to $40, 000, 000 in the
first
six years
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but
had soared to
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just
above 70
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million
US dollars by the
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end
of the decade.

By contrast, the rise in
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book
sales in France and Italy was much less sharp. While there was a moderate increase in the quantity of spending in the former, which climbed from well over 50
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million
in 1995 to roughly 75
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million
in 2005, the money channeled to
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buy
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books
in Italy went up
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only
slightly
, rising from $50
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million
in 1995 to over 60, 000, 000 in 2005.
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IELTS academic Money spent on books in European countries between 1995 and 2005.

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